 By Sanni Oluwatimileyin My father says in the darkness of the night, with your lover
You're three. No more, no less. Remember, it's a ritual of two bodies and God, or the wind, or a winged promise hovering over you both, its white feathers burning in the heat of love. But with you, I'm a double-yolked egg — a siamese twin. There are two spiral minds within this frail body of ours, —two helices intertwined about a common axis & there is no parting / to this union borne under a red moon.
13 Comments
Modupe
5/7/2021 06:25:02 am
Awwwh 🥰🥰
Faiza
5/7/2021 02:59:14 pm
It's so beautiful and i keep going back to read it
Seriki Theresa
5/7/2021 07:21:56 am
I read this piece, pondered on it, read it again and pondered some more.
Omotola
5/7/2021 11:17:19 am
Wow! I keep going back to read it. Love the the description and use of metaphor. What I understand from it is that the two are one and there's nobody in between.
Isaiah Baba Fada
5/7/2021 11:25:35 am
The writer metaphorically explains this piece as a case where two souls dwells in one body. A show of a feeling that love can not go wrong. Beautiful piece.
Osemuche Hope Chukwudumebi
5/7/2021 11:12:30 pm
😍😍😍My daddy my daddy, your baby is seeing, an amazing expression of your ways. This is amazing.
Iyabode Agbesusi Obafemi
9/7/2021 02:26:29 am
This poem is beautifully written. Sanni use of Metaphor to express his father's point of view and his point of view on vow is unique and simultaneously written. Great poem.
Praise
9/7/2021 07:46:51 am
This is a beautiful painting of love. I love the powerful use of imagery and metaphors. I love it!
Olumide Solomon Faniran
10/7/2021 05:51:59 am
Hmm, under a red moon- looks like there is more to be revealed. Strong piece. Kudos to the writer.
Sophia Adepoju
17/7/2021 04:02:51 am
Poetry has a way of making you find meaning within the strokes and curves of each words.
Ohuoba Uba Chijioke
24/7/2021 10:01:47 am
There's more to a pair, the romantic feelings and environment. They are not always lonely, even in silence, their mind talks
Emike Odion-osigwe
27/7/2021 11:24:50 pm
My favourite line has to be "white feathers burning in the heat..."
ogedengbe Tolulope Impact
28/7/2021 03:57:26 am
Damn it! This is beautiful. I said it, Timi is a writer to watch out for in this space. Keep inking brother Leave a Reply. |
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