 The Ritual It starts with an orchestra The winds would play a beautiful symphony on their flutes, The melody would resound with force in the hearts of men. And the trees shall begin dancing to their tunes. Just then, The alarm shall sound across the heavens, And with speed, each one shall run Till they hit the finish line with a thudding sound. The Clouds are pregnant, And this ritual must be performed if the earth is to be blessed with a new scent. Olafisoye-Oragbade Oluwatosin is a 300 Level Medical student of the University of Ilorin Teaching Hospital, Kwara State. He is a poet, spoken words artiste, script writer and content creator. Oluwatosin believes that the power of beautifully crafted words can help shape the lives of its readers. It is for this reason that he has decided to fuel his passion especially in poetry writing. His poems touches areas of Love, Hope, Perspective, Religion and lots more.
His Social Media Handles are: Facebook: Oluwatosin Olafisoye Twitter: @TosinOlafisoye Instagram: the_king_davey.
9 Comments
3/6/2020 11:33:19 am
Oh he made rain sounds like a soothing sound system. I love it, this poetry brings so much hope. 14/6/2020 09:17:54 am
This is beautiful! Found myself imagining the sounds as I read. 24/6/2020 02:56:59 am
Olafisoye's The Ritual, the rain is depicted, metaphorically, as a cleansing ritual for the purification of the Earth, and "if the Earth is to be blessed with a new scent". It shares wonderful imageries with the reader which serves as the building point for its clearness. one has no reason to struggle with understanding, for whatever is used in this poem is accessible by the reader. it's a terrific read. 24/6/2020 02:59:30 am
In Olafisoye's The Ritual, the rain is depicted, metaphorically, as a cleansing ritual for the purification of the Earth, and "if the Earth is to be blessed with a new scent". It shares wonderful imageries with the reader which serves as the building point for its clearness. one has no reason to struggle with understanding, for whatever is used in this poem is accessible by the reader. it's a terrific read.
Aidenn
24/6/2020 05:45:48 am
A beautiful piece — lovely use of metaphors.
Felix Akinlaja
29/6/2020 11:10:35 pm
I concur with the previous comments that this piece is no doubt a beautiful poem. The use of poetic devices in the poem is exceptional. I didn't imagine the event that announces the start of the ritual (the rain) and the effect of rainfall (the soothing, pure scent it leaves on planet earth) could be painted with such vivid, well-articulated imagery until I start imagining while perusing the poem.
Samuel
14/8/2020 04:05:10 am
This is beautiful sir
Faridat
14/8/2020 03:52:05 pm
You mangle metaphors so naturally. Genius!!!! Leave a Reply. |
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