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Ogadinma, A Reality not Far from Home

1/4/2022

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By Ilerioluwa Olatunde
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“You better learn how to drive before you get married.” These words resounded with shock in my ears as I wondered how my conversation with an older man diverted to this. Ever since I graduated, the next expectation almost everyone has had for me is marriage, and everything seems tied to this phase of life. Even within the four walls of my house, I must perform roles in preparation for marriage. I constantly hear, “You need to learn how to cook. No man will help you in the kitchen.”

I keep wondering why everything I do or not do must be related to this marital status. As a young woman with aspirations, I wonder why no one has ever spoken about my ambition. Why I haven’t heard, “You need to learn how to cook in preparation for living independently or when you leave this country and you’re far from home.” Why can't I have a conversation with an older person without the mention of marriage?

What broke the camel’s back for me was the follow-up comment, “You are getting old.” Seriously, I am in my early 20s, and that is “old.”

This is one of many unfair societal expectations women have faced in the past, and books like Ogadinma remind us that there is a long way to go. ​

Set in the 1980s in Nigeria, Ogadinma tells the story of a 17-year-old journey to freedom, battling everything the patriarchal society in that era threw her way. Throughout the book, the author paints a vivid picture of the different shades of patriarchy. Right from the first scene, we see the protagonist, Ogadinma, under the heel of someone ready to take advantage and an unjust circumstance. Ogadinma, in need of admission, went to Barrister Chima in the hopes that with his status and influence, he would be of great assistance. But, unknown to her, this will lead to a sequence of events characterised by manipulation, abuse, exploitation, and betrayal. Smitten by her desire for admission, the barrister took advantage of her desperation and coerced her into having sex with him. 
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Ogadinma’s misfortune with Barrister Chima was the beginning of an emotional roller-coaster I experienced as a reader. This scene triggered a series of emotions, anger, clenched fist, and anguish. However, Ogadinma wasn’t oblivious to the lawyer’s intention. She didn't explicitly refuse his advances; instead, she stumbles to his repeated sexual demands because she believed he could secure her a spot at the university.
“There was a moment when a scream came to her throat, but she clamped her lips shut. She would be going to the university. She would get into the best university. She would study Literature, and all of this would no longer matter. She spoke those words to herself, even when her body stretched, and a sharp pain travelled swiftly to her waist.”

I was angry that he took advantage of her naivety and vulnerability. I was more furious that she laid there and willed her body to the lawyer’s sexual wants. As humans, we are prone to letting our anger drive us to the path of judgement and criticism. But when you think deeply, you realise anyone could have fallen victim. You realise that we are all vulnerable in our times of need, and it only takes special grace not to stumble.

Despite stumbling to the lawyer's needs, the admission didn’t come through. Then, Ogadinma finds out she is pregnant. Out of fear of the stigma associated with having a child out of wedlock and its threat to her education, she aborts the pregnancy. When her father, a single parent, discovers what she had done, he sends her away to Lagos as punishment and to bury the shame of the situation.
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What struck me the most was how the author effortlessly portrayed our society’s response to such situations. When young girls are raped and violated, they are made to believe it's their shame to carry, not the rapist. Women are made to stumble through disgrace despite being victims and silenced while the perpetrator walks free.

While Lagos offers Ogadinma a fresh start and love, we learn all that glitters are not gold. She falls in love with Tobe, her uncle's wife's brother, and after a brief, undefined relationship, he proposes marriage to her. The weeks leading up to the wedding reveal Tobe's controlling tendencies. He was always dominating her decision and choice, to the extent that he didn't let her select her wedding dress. Of course, it didn't help that Ogadinma and Tobe were eighteen years apart. 

The advice Ogadinma got from her aunty was, “Be a virtuous wife, and you will enjoy him well-well.” Yet, another narrative is that she must do his biddings if she wants to enjoy her marriage. The institution of marriage is still regarded positively by both men and women in Nigeria. However, women are unfairly expected to maintain the marriage. The author left no stone unturned in portraying this societal expectation through the story of Ogadinma.

When a military operation led to her husband being sent to prison, Ogadinma was oblivious to the trauma this event would spring up. 
“She had never imagined that they would lose everything, that Tobe would come out of prison with nothing to go home to, and this filled her with horror. She had grown up with little and could cope with any circumstance she found herself in. But Tobe, without his wealth, was an image she had never thought to visualize. She didn’t know that Tobe. And now this idea of him terrified her.”

The experience changed him, and her fears became real: “He left home early and returned late. He spoke little at home and lingered in the bedroom, and when she forced a conversation or told a joke, he did not laugh too loud, did not argue too eagerly, and he no longer sang his favourite song when they came on the radio.” 

The abuse progressed from verbal to physical assault, and Ogadinma left for her father’s house as she wasn’t sure she could endure the new Tobe. Her father's response to this situation represents society’s perspective in defining a woman’s worth. To many, a woman’s value depends on keeping a man and bearing his name. Anything contrary is often met with contentions, and women who are brave enough to break free are criticised. Hence, expecting Ogadinma’s father to protect her is to build castles in the air: “You think you have endured what others haven’t? He asks upon her return to Kano. ‘You must forgive him. Do you understand me?”

Her father sends her back to her husband’s house, comparing her attitude to her mother’s. Ogadinma's mother's problem is that she didn't fit into what Nigerians call "wife material," a woman who suppresses her aspirations and identity to satisfy her husband. "You know what your mother’s problem was? She was too ambitious. She wanted to do everything in the world as though she was a man, reducing my son to the wife, and it didn't work."  In a world like hers, it's as though we can't have both a career and a family.

In Nigeria, it’s the woman’s job to build the home and make it a haven. Hence, the woman is often blamed for whatever happens in the home. Upon returning home, her aunty questioned Ogadinma’s attitude mercilessly, without once questioning the man who had the guts to raise his hands on a woman. Repeatedly, we are reminded of how women are blamed for the man's bad decisions, choices, and troubles and how women are expected to behave and act as if nothing happened. As Ogadinma’s aunt puts it, “Don’t be angry when he takes out the frustration on you; that’s the burden we women have to bear.” This belief that women act as catalysts for such fury indicates how abuse is seen as an inevitable part of married life.

Tobe finds every opportunity to blame his self-inflicted misfortunes on Ogadinma, which leads to another molestation by a religious icon in the name of deliverance. Ogadinma said, “As a child in Kano, I heard about preachers who blamed women for the misfortune that befell their men, how they put women through series of rigorous cleansing ceremonies.” While it's not Tobe but an innocent victim that winds up at the receiving end of this emotional and physical exploitation, this reality is not far from home. 

In this intriguing novel, Ukamaka Olisakwe helps us see the notion that a woman’s self-worth is dependent on being someone’s wife. So, it’s little wonder, Ogadinma’s father sent her back to her husband despite the abuse. Also, to many people, it doesn’t matter the woman’s accomplishments. If there is no man, she is incomplete.

Ogadinma’s boss insisted on her marital status because it earned her the respect she didn't receive as a single woman despite her accomplishments. “She recently married one small boy like that and now insists everyone must add “madam” to her name as a sign of respect. You know, as a married woman…. I don’t blame her, people disrespected her because she was unmarried, even though she is the most successful hairdresser in Lagos. So, she got herself a small boy, married him and took his name, and now wants everyone to call her ‘madam.’” 

Ogadinma is a powerful and evocative novel, making it compulsive and arduous. Compulsive that I didn’t want to put it down, and yet at the same time, I couldn’t bear to carry on reading as it unsettled me and triggered a turbulence of emotions. It felt like I was ripped into the protagonist’s struggles and could feel her emotions. Notwithstanding, Ogadinma is exceptionally crafted so that it provokes thoughts that linger long after you close the book.

The novel reminded me of His Only Wife by Peace Adzo Medie, where we experienced all the headlong emotional soaring and plummeting through the quest for identity and independence of a young woman and the rules she might have to break in the process. While Ogadinma ended on a cliff-hanger, His Only Wife ends by breaking a notion that Ogadinma lacks; the idea that a woman’s success depends on a man.

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I appreciate Ukamaka Olisakwe’s detailed attention to political events and the mention of African literary classics. She reminded me of Colours of Hatred by Obinna Udenwe, as it is another historical and military-characterized learning curve. In addition, I love that the author portrayed Ogadinma in such a way that makes the reader aware of her naivety. Finally, the exploration of friendship is also worthy of mention.

Readers are compelled to empathise with Ogadinma in this powerful prose as the author blends a descriptive writing prowess with an emotional story to make a compelling case. Ogadinma, which means “everything will be alright,” will seem contradictory as the protagonist stinks deeper into turbulent water. Regardless, Ogadinma is a steady narrative that shuns parody to keep you engaged while hoping the protagonist snaps out of her naivety and the bondage of societal expectation and the culprits are punished. While the latter is a reality we never got, the former eventually came into being. When another abuse landed her in the hospital, Ogadinma must decide if that will be the straw that breaks the camel's back.

Described as a 'feminist classic in the making,' Ukamaka does not spare any effort to expose the systemic oppression of women and the culture of sexism in Nigeria. Overall, the author presents a compelling flak of historical and cultural practices that persist today, practices that are far too relevant to be ignored.

Book Reviewer’s Biography

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Olatunde Ilerioluwa is a creative writer and public speaker interested in fiction, creative nonfiction, and performance poetry. Her love for books has also influenced her book reviewing. She writes to take her readers on a journey of insight, knowledge, and excitement. Her work focuses on book reviews, lifestyle, and the human condition. She draws inspiration from the books she reads, societal issues, personal life, interaction with others, and her relationship with God. 
 
When she is not writing and journaling, she reads, listens to music, has fun in her head, or does research. A Karen Kingsbury book is all she needs after a stressful day. She hopes to write more and publish books.

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16 Comments
Adetutu link
1/4/2022 11:01:12 pm

I think Ogadinma is one of the best African feminist books I have read. It was hard not to be triggered by some events in the book, like when she was taken to that prophet who raped her in the name of cleansing. It was triggering for me because a lot of people don't focus on how spiritual abuse is a thing, and a lot of women are silently going through worse in the name of religion. I remember one time after my Master's programme, someone from church had asked me what I had planned next. I wasn't surprised by the way he scrunched up his nose when I said PhD. He didn't care that we weren't close or that he wasn't family and still went ahead to let me know time is running out and I need to get married. As if marriage is the only proof of a fulfilled life and as if I could marry myself. It was heartbreaking that moments, when it felt like things will be alright, ended up worse than the first time.

I enjoyed reading your views about the book and I am glad you put into words some of the feelings I couldn't find expression for. I think people should read this book, whether they identify as feminists or not; it will be hard not to identify with any of the characters.

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Edith
2/4/2022 03:48:28 pm

Ogadinma is truly the mirror of the society. The plight faced by women. Sometimes I feel as though once you are a women a book has been written with your name on it of how you are expected to live.the do's and don't.

Personally, I have seen what so many young ladies go through once they have started reaching certain age with no man to call husband. They are insulted and so many hurtful words said to them.

They are people who don't give free service.As a lady you must give something in order to give something and that is sad.

People like that should be exposed and brought to book.

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Funke Adegbokiki
5/4/2022 08:00:55 am

I haven't read Ogadima but this review made me feel like I have. It is sad that females have to go through this everyday- the exploitation, the nagging on marriage, the expectations she would down play her aspirations to please the husband and verbal and physical abuse among many others. There is a need for these issues to be aired and deliberated upon. It shouldn't just be the women talking, the men should be bought into this as it takes two to tango. I am definitely getting a copy. Thank you for the review, Ilerioluwa.

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Modester
6/4/2022 08:05:57 am

This review has to be the best I have read in a while. It is very detailed. Though I have not read the book, I have been able to see the pages through the eyes of the reviewer.
We see the issues raised everyday. Women in Nigeria face a lot of challenges and abuse. Sadly most of them see this as normal after all is the norm. Reading this story reminded me of my former neighbor who faced emotional and physical abuse from her husband. It was terrible but sadly she couldn't do anything about that. It is not for lack of knowledge or not wanting to, but because of what "society" would say.
There is need for these issues to be talked about. Let women who are ignorant know that their worth is not tied to taking a man's name. Let them know that they can be married and have a career. Let them know that they too deserve happiness.

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Olumide Gabriel Areo
6/4/2022 09:56:31 pm

What stroke me most, was the final defeat she had over her struggles. One that any other in the society may have being entirely over powered.

I appreciate the emotions the reviewer embedded on this work. Thank you for a heart felt read.

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Chioma
8/4/2022 01:53:53 am

Ogadinma has been a book I've looked forward to reading for a long time, and that desire is being fueled more by this review.

A typical Nigerian society makes marriage look like a must-have goal for every woman. You would be sad to find out how many people who would curse at you when you say "I don't want to get married." It's like defiling something sacred.

This review, through storytelling, describes what the book is about in the most relatable way.

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Ugochukwu Anadị
10/4/2022 11:29:03 am

Just a day or two ago, a popular Nigerian Gospel Singer died. Rumours have it that she died due to domestic abuses she had suffered under her husband. While we may not know the full story yet, people have taken to their social media handles to pontificate on the need to leave abusive marriages. It's better than to be unmarried and be alive than to be married and dead, they argue.

While that is an argument without flaws, it'll be delusive of us to ignore the larger issues at play there -- the societal conditioning. Society has made it in such a way that a failed marriage is always the woman's fault, after all, it's the duty of the woman to keep her family together. It becomes more serious considering the fact that here is a woman whose fame is built on Christian Gospel Songs, and by extension, the same Christian values that had ordered "for better, for worst."

Gozie Okeke and his ex-wife faced lots of attacks online when they divorced. To some, it's the most unheard for a Gospel singer's marriage to breakdown. Which gospel are they now preaching if they can't keep their marriage? Their music career never survived that onslaught.

What would have the society said had the dead woman walked out of the marriage with her life intact? I'm happy that Ukamaka Olisakwe had added her own voice to this problem of systemic patriarchy by gifting us Ogadimma. I'm especially moved by Olatunde's review. Her review is as moving as it is informing. The language, the style, the storytelling, all superb.

I'm concerned about internalized patriarchy and how to interrogate even ourselves to know if we are guilty of that which we despise and condemn. What, for example, does Olatunde mean when she said "... without once questioning the man who had the guts to raise his hands on a woman"? Is she by chance saying that a man shouldn't hit a woman, not because it's wrong for one to engage in physical violence (even verbal violence) but because she's a WOMAN and a man shouldn't hit a woman? Is that because a woman is considered a weaker sex? Does it mean, that for Olatunde, Will Smith's slap of Chris Rock at the Grammy's is pardonable since it's a man slapping a man?

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Nahna James
12/4/2022 07:10:46 am

Honestly speaking judging from this review I know ogadinma will be a very good novel to read. It's so sad that even in this era marriage is still seen as a must for our Nigerian ladies, to be considered as complete women.
Am definitely getting a copy of this novel.

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Oluwole josephine
13/4/2022 11:12:27 am

Ogadimma is indeed a must read book, an eye opener, showing us the dent our community has in their belief system of marriage, I couldn't help but wonder, if marriage contains all these, why should anyone marry.
Bringing the society to see their flaws through this book, is indeed a step towards solving the issue.
A book that tells of how a little naive girl, lost her innocence unjustly, and allowes herself to be repeatedly molested just to gain opportunity to fulfil her dreams of furthering her education, the unexpected happens, and she must now bear the shame of unwanted pregnancy alone, sent away from home to cover the impending shame she would bring to her family, again life throws another set of arrows as she now has to suffer and endure in a marriage that births no joy, where she is repeatedly, emotionally, and physically assulted by the one that she suppose to call "husband",can she still hold on based on the demands of the society, or is she going to be strong enough to let go?

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Alimo Francess link
14/4/2022 01:41:03 pm

Ogadinma novel is a powerful one that speaks against patriarchy and African backwardness, I wished people like the late Osinachi could have read the book and learnt from it. It's indeed an eye opener.

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Jamila Aminu link
15/4/2022 03:12:38 am

Ogadinma is an interesting story of a young woman.
The story shows how a young woman is expected to get married immediately she reach a certain age, nobody cares to ask if u are ready dey all feel, u are suppose to learn Des or that becos u are getting married. I think Des particular thing of making ladies feel their worth is tied to getting married needs to be corrected, our girls should be taught how to live independently before marriage

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Tobiloba
18/4/2022 10:26:11 am

Reading this review is like reading the book itself.
It is always painful to me that women have to go through a lot of abuse in the hands of men.
The most painful part of it all is that the system, all over the world may be, is structured such that the victims remain to be victimized again and again, while the culprits go free as if nothing has happened.
This alone, to me, is like a fuel that keeps the fire of abuse against women burning wildly

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Innocent Chukwubuike Matthew
22/4/2022 10:34:53 pm

I would like to read this book. This review of it is quite emotional. It unveils 'The Doctrine of women Dependence' propagated by the stone age members of our society. Ogadinma's Aunty telling her to be a virtuous woman is good, but it would have been better if she gave that advice to both Ogadinma and her wild husband. In my opinion Ogadinma's Aunty is prejudiced in that she believed that women are to blame for any problem that surface in marriage. In the same vein, any man, even if he is older than Methuselah, who lays on his wife is unwise. In fact Ogadinma's husband does not love her!

Ogadinma's father telling her to return to the man who manhandles her is a 'customary folly'. What would the father say or do if she were killed by the 'civil tiger'? This is betrayal. Ogadinma's is, thus, like the proverbial bat who, according to the Igbos, does not belong to beasts of the land nor those of the air. African parents should send this 'traditional antagonism' to limbo.

Every man should cherish his wife for his respect consists in her and hers in him. This, I believe, is why marriage was institutionalized. So any man who does not want to care for his wife should rather be a celibate. After all, everyone must not get married; marriage is meant for those who understand it philosophy and practice.

It may hurt some people, but I would still say it. Some woman are somewhat the cause of the perpetuity of women subjugation in our society, even up till now. These women are those who call any woman, that wants to freed her from this patriarchal violence, 'a recalcitrant wife.' If they do not let this idea go, patriarchy must live with us till second coming.

Finally, I would like to recapitulate that Ogadinma is worth reading.

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Ehimen
27/4/2022 11:00:43 am

Going through this review makes me feel like I was reading the book itself.

The view that Marriage completes a woman is a misconception that all hands should be on deck to wash away from the mind of the misinformed.

Maybe the world would be a little better if we try just that.

Hmmm

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Ehimen
27/4/2022 11:05:03 am

If this problem choking female hood is at least brought to light the way this book just did, we'll be an inch away from a better society where no gender would be left worse off.

Kudos.

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Olajumoke link
30/4/2022 10:00:38 pm

An intriguing review excellently written.
No one ever talks about the pressure that comes along with being a youth in your 20's in this country. This book is a true depiction of the problems young ladies face in the society. A glaring fault in society. This is a book everyone should read at least once in their lifetime.

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