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HUMANS & BULLETS & PERIL

1/6/2023

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By Njikonye Charles
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                                                                                                                             isn't terrorism truly as senseless as rape?

a flash of bulletproof vests & body thronged spaces slaps my mind, & my thoughts eject themselves like cassettes; an Afghanistan fellow bearing the same pair of kidneys as me, same December count on earth as me—crumble into tomb songs at the lodging of two bullets in his body. one bullet crafts a tent from his heart skins & fattens, soaking his young blood. the other hollows his cerebrum, punctures his memories, & it oozes onto his blood-reddened earth, making faded nostalgic holograms of which he folds a paper into an aeroplane, & frees it to float the air. this boy wanted to be a pilot. now, his soul will he pilot into the jaws of 
the afterlife. & here in Nigeria, mother brings supper to me as I sat, lunging my body into the viper mouth of the news playing on the TV. as the news unboxed—it was Sunday today, & a busload of worshippers never made it to church. they were attacked, massacred by unknown gunmen as the news outlets in Nigeria had come to call them. & my best friend's father got rinsed by death in a bomb blast at a park. the newscaster says: 60 persons lost their lives in an explosion. so I ask, what was the number of my best friend's father among the victims, the 60 unfortunate? was his lifeless body the 37th added to the tally? or was it the 50th, 43rd, the 4th? or was his body colouring into the sand under 2 other bodies, just to be found the next day & counted as the 63rd? you see, terrorism is as senseless as rape, bending a man's whole existence into mere digits.
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Writer's Biography

Njikonye Charles (he/him) is a writer & poet from Umuahia, Nigeria. His works have appeared in Eremite Poetry, NantyGreens, Last Girls Club, Poetry Column-NND, and many others. He is interested in technology & medicine.
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Achakpokri Naomi link
9/6/2023 12:30:14 am

I love how the poet use a narrative way, to portray the similarities and feeling of rape and terrorism which is an occurring event in Nigeria.

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Gena
12/6/2023 09:57:46 pm

Bending a man’s whole existence into digits, I love it🤗

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Amaraeze Onyinyechi
24/6/2023 09:48:42 pm

The vivid descriptions embedded in this piece is one to behold. Violence is becoming the lifeblood of this country and it is a drowning weight on us all, writers like this placate our sorrows, because tucked somewhere within the angst that is portrayed in this work is HOPE —even if it be little.

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Ufedo Adaji
29/6/2023 09:36:21 am

It's really scary how one of the victims of these terrorist attacks could hit close to home. It could be a friend or a relative or that random guy on the street that always greets everyone on his way to work. This is a wonderful depiction of what goes on in our minds when stuff like this occur. Well-done!

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Chinonso link
30/6/2023 10:56:24 am

I absolutely love this piece thank you for sharing! First of all, the imagery is just superb. Each sentence tells a visual story - that's poetry, that's storytelling! And the last line just hits the nail.

Second, I like connection and/or transition from what is being shown on television to what is happening in your reality. Terrorism is just that no matter how it's packaged, senseless. It's so interesting how we can be worlds apart but still have similar experiences.

Finally, I could just feel your passion towards your friend when you asked "what was the number of my best friend's father among the victims". Puts things into perspective but in a way, keeps us numb from the fact that real lives are loss.

I mean, exceptional work with this piece. Thank you again for sharing!

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