By Olivia Onyekwena an old soul in celestial transit do you watch me from the sky? I stare long at these photo frames of me and you from times before your aura lingers on in the passenger seat with no one singing along to our favourite song on this three-hour ride to the place where bodies meet sand and stone when this earth's journey comes to an end if I see you again do you promise to say goodbye before you leave? Writer’s Biography Olivia Onyekwena is a writer and poet who writes about memories, lost love, and what-ifs. She is inspired by starry and moonlit nights together with the tons of tv shows she consumes. Her dream is to write and create a series of young adult TV shows alongside recording multiple podcast episodes and a football show. When Olivia is not writing, she's reading fanfiction.
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Ezioma Kalu
1/4/2022 12:43:07 pm
All I have left of you is the 'memories.' And they too, would fade soon. If I see you again, please say goodbye before you walk away...
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1/4/2022 02:06:23 pm
The beauty of the words is undeniable, and the fact that the writer is able to capture the feeling of loss in few stanzas is also beautiful. She misses her love one and boom transformed feelings to words. Personally I think this piece is not far from perfect but needs some corrections. There's literally little use of punctuation marks. No comma where it's supposed to be for instance,
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Edith
2/4/2022 04:04:37 pm
Personally I love poems or I would say I enjoy reading poems that are short but are able to clearly convey the message intended.
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Gege Eniola
2/4/2022 06:59:58 pm
This piece talks about memories the writer has concerning a soul which was close to hers before it moved to the great beyond.
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Ehimen
27/4/2022 11:18:53 am
Stop it will ya?
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Chioma
28/4/2022 08:41:39 am
The author describes the different phases(good times, bad times, sorrow, depression, despair) of life and our natural response to these times.
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An unexpected departure
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