 main aim and main game war and truce train and wait the mission of absolutism a posteriori affliction engages absurd situations true complications misfortunes of ages a mystery untold a subject untackled a name unmentioned a victim unknown deux et Vous
qui est nécessaire? La même encore C’est deux ! Choisir un entre le deux Choose one between the two Decide freely Don’t be a tool A posteriori A mission unaccomplished Define and I will suggest Admit and I will oppose Friction is mere fiction Realism beats no naturalism The two sides are minuet They are the dreams unfulfilled pains and travails tears we shed The two sides are the yesterday They are the today conviction to achieve momentum we believe the two sides conditions and reality embedded in us our choices like lawyers we defend our client, ourselves would we win? Would we lose? Evelyn Nana Ama Asare, is a writer, actress, poet and student at the University of Ghana. Her stage name is Evelyn The Piper. Her goal in writing is to nourish society. She believes that poetry feeds the soul! Blog: www.evelynasare.blogspot.com Facebook and Instagram: @evelynthepiper
3 Comments
El_Joearl_A
2/2/2019 09:50:26 pm
Well... I've always known poem is crazy... One second you see a picture the other second you're with an album... This is a Lotta something ma'am! Well done
Wura
3/2/2019 05:27:46 am
Although I like poetry, I think that this poem tried to capture too many things using complicated language that the readers may miss the point which is life having two sides in many aspects. Complex language makes your reading slightly unrelatable to an average poetry reader. Also, I think that you did not need to have too many examples of two sides to things to drive to one point, its reads overly repetitive. You could have creatively told a prose poetry to state the same thing. But well done. At first I was a bit confused, taken aback by the use of words that seemed to make the poem complex. But then I see that the repetition of words with similar meanings may have been in order to drive home the points she was trying to drive home. It all, though it could have been simpler, it was a good read Leave a Reply. |