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CLINKERS

1/4/2023

9 Comments

 
By Muhammed Sanni Olowonjoyin
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Sometimes, I want to say that there’s a holocaust
Going on in this place & there’s a hand tilting
A country into an inferno. Which means the wishes in an 
Anthem aren’t finding the ears of God. 

There are days I wake to the broken voices 
Of mothers' bullets unpaired from their children after 
The radio autotunes into threnodies.
Breaking:
Two policemen become dust to the bullets
Of known gunmen

A market is set ablaze by the wands of 
Destiny

A country is becoming a morgue for dreams


See, here, burying a gun under your pillow
In a one-eyed sleep cannot furl your skin to safety &
Even prayers are mere wishes, meaning your 
Next hymn can be followed by the whistles of the 
Angel of death, before your house becomes a gathering
For the next Janazah and awakening of hashtags.

I don’t know how to say that this place has been forsaken 
Without the urge to pluck prayers from my lungs and 
Chew them until my teeth ache. & that is the least I 
Can do before flaming into clinkers.
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Writer's Biography

Muhammed Olowonjoyin, TPC III, studies Biochemistry at the University of Ilorin. He was third runner-up in the Nigerian Students Poetry Prize (2022) and was named Honorable Mention in the Kreative Diadem Poetry Contest (2022).

​His poems have been published/forthcoming in Stanchion, Quarter After Eight, Brittle Paper, The Bitchin' Kitsch, Aôthen Magazine, The Shallow Tales Review, Acropolis Journal, The Decadent Review, and elsewhere. In addition, he reads poetry for The Dodge Magazine.

9 Comments
Flourish
8/4/2023 04:25:23 pm

The end>>>>>>
It's so sad that this is our reality right now. Because of man's need to feel like they're doing something, prayers will keep going…that is really all that can be done.

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Oluwatoyin Magbagbeola
15/4/2023 12:18:21 pm

This piece remind me of the book "of this our country", the reality of our Society. Kudos to the Writer 👍👍

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Esther Adepetun
15/4/2023 12:51:39 pm

With a heart-wrenching portrayal, the poem showcases the current state of an area consumed by violence and chaos. Dreams are buried, and prayers are mere wishes, which is depicted through haunting and powerful imagery that forces readers to confront the harsh reality of a world torn apart by conflict.

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Jimoh Abdullah
15/4/2023 02:37:02 pm

It's a great one. A poignant poem.

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Ilodigwe C Kenneth
15/4/2023 05:17:02 pm

If all things were equal, Mohammed's poem would pass for a classical attempt at illustrating Nigeria's dire state over the last eight years in lyrics.

The language of the poem is piquantly stimulating and wittingly alive.

Mohammed brings on the spot a gossamer imagery with symbolisms and innuendoes that sufficiently qualifies the state of affairs in the sociopolitical climate of present day Nigeria.

Also visibly clear is his careful, if rather deft, employment of metaphors, hyperboles, euphemisms, etc. I think that with time, Mohammed will meet the high marks of great poetry by single departures. And what a title too, "Crinkers".

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Goodness Daniels
16/4/2023 12:04:51 am

Wow wow wow
This is soo good. Had to save it to read more than once. Well done. How can I find you on Twitter or elsewhere?

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Mercy
16/4/2023 12:25:27 am

Intriguing and absorbing. A beautiful piece you have here!!!

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Makanjuola Azeezah
17/4/2023 05:37:48 pm

impressive. that's really well said
The basic reality of our noble society..

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Makanjuola Azeezah
17/4/2023 05:38:51 pm

impressive. that's really well said
The basic reality of our noble society..

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